Prototype(Demo) Plot Discussion

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Re: Prototype(Demo) Plot Discussion

Postby Thogrim » Tue Apr 13, 2010 3:59 am

Personally, I like this direction. Though, and this could be just me, but I'd like to keep the romance down for the most part.

Actually I'm most surprised that Dja can write this well. :wink: I think this is the first time I have read anything other than technical jargon from you.
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Re: Prototype(Demo) Plot Discussion

Postby MarcoFerrigno » Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:29 am

yeah its surprising to talk to DJA and realise hes actually a person, the jargon tends to make him seem not so... human? more machine than man?
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